Dear readers, I’m learning about persuasive writing so here is my Pease of writing. To began with I should get my own room becauseI get to watch l pay to get my own TV (Maybe). I don’t have to get woken up buy my sister. I will get to sleep with Mario (cat) I will go to sleep when my parents tell me. I clean my own room by myself. lets remember I want my own room. I won’t get to hear when I’m half asleep to turn the tv up I can just keep it my way or the way mom said to. If I get my own room I will keep it clean. if I had my own room I will put my own clothes into the dryer. That is why I sould get my own room. Love Mackenzie. Please comment
Dear Mackenzie,
I love your writing.
Love,
Hamsika
Dear Mackenzie,
I love all the detail you put in your post keep up the good work.:)
love,
Olivia
Mackenzie I don’t think you will be getting your own room any time soon….great writing and one day you will have your own room
Love, mom